adding detail

We have been learning to add detail to boring sentences to make them exciting। this is my one


I fell on the ground।
I collapsed on the ground।
I collapsed into the mud।
I collapsed into the smelly mud।
I collapsed into the smelly sticky mud and I could feel my feet sinking into the mud।

Kaleidescope Art

When I started cutting out my picture I had to grab a white piece of paper and stick all my pictures of the pecock on my piece of paper but you have to be careful because you have to do it properly you have to make it look like it is reflecting and when it looks so reflected then you have your kaleidescope then it will turn out to be how you want it to and then see the teacher to check if it is possible to carry on with. Afterwards it will ready and Completed to Show our Class.